Tried to apply some of the suggestions. Here is the old version for comparison [link]
Just a little personal drawing :-D
Rather rough; I was experimenting with using the brush tool in sai, painting looser and few colour. It's much more comfortable, yet it's hard to resist zooming in and nitpicking details... r-really hard
Will be scrapped later, just wanted to upload something sort of related to the Moon Festival! So have Rainn soaking his butt off while looking forlornly at a lantern in the water
And... um... I'm a dork so here's some comics leading to and after this picture
[link] & [link]
Hahaha okay... please continue enjoying your day ;;
crit is always welcome.